Monthly Archives: April 2018

Action Pack

I’ve watched some action movies recently and here’s a rundown.

Atomic Blonde– An action movie with a female lead! We don’t get many of these. The great Charlize Theron plays MI6 agent Lorraine Broughton. During the Cold War, she assigned the job of going into Berlin to recover a list of double agents. James McAvoy co-stars as David Percival, a fellow agent tasked to assist Lorraine. It goes wrong right from the start where Lorraine is ambushed by the enemy right when she gets to Berlin.

Starting off, I felt Atomic Blonde was a paint by the numbers action movie. While that’s pretty true to the end, I found the beginning to be mostly dull. It gets much better as it goes a long. Once things come together and the last 35 minutes hit, the movie really takes off. While there is excellent action scenes throughout, that final chase scene that spans a large part of the city and is presented as one single shot is some riveting cinema. Director David Leitch has an extensive stuntman/stunt coordinator career and it shows here. John Wick was his breakthrough director gig and that launched him directly into this and the upcoming Deadpool 2. He knows how to frame action and move the camera well so action is impactful, believable, and easy to follow. Impressive work that’s getting him bigger gig, I think this is just the start of Leitch becoming a big name in Hollywood.

Baby Driver– I like Edgar Wright as a director a lot. The planning that goes into his films to make them edit the way he wants is often stunning. Baby Driver is a simple story that uses car stunts as it’s main action focus. With most franchises focusing on gun and fist fights, it’s refreshing to see a throwback to the classic days of action cinema. I’m sure you’re thinking the Fast and Furious franchise is all about vehicular set pieces but they ignore the laws of physics and CG everything to get it done. Baby Driver does it au naturel with on set stunt driving. Often remarkable to watch and the heavy integration of music to lead the way makes it even more fun.

Baby has been forced to work as the getaway driver for a crime boss (Doc) after they crossed paths many years ago. Baby is the only driver Doc has used as he’s got a 100% success rate. Everyone he first meets thinks Baby is weird and amateurish for listening to music all the time, but it’s what helps him cope with his tinnitus. Each job gets Baby a little closer to paying off his debt to Doc until his final heist ruins his plans. Add in a boy meets girl scenario and you’ve got a neat protagonist with a heart of gold. Baby Driver keeps things tight and simple and I think it’s all the better for it.

Kingsman: The Golden Circle– When the Golden Circle crime syndicate makes it move to hold the world hostage with poison, they destroy the Kingsman agency first to keep anyone from stopping them. Fortunately for the world, they don’t kill them all and the remaining Kingsman agents go to America to get help from an allied spy agency called Statesman.

Matthew Vaughn, much like Edgar Wright, is a kinetic director. The camera gets you into the middle of he action, flinging you head over heels each throw and explosion. I like much of his work but this one left me wanting something more. I liked the first Kingsman a lot as it was new and took me surprise. I love the spy genre and I’m all about new takes and spins on the staple elements. This movie resurrects a character in the middle of saving the world so there’s a bit of a family reunion in there. While Golden Circle expands the Kingsman universe, it still feels closed in to me. I think it’s all the CG. It’s (clearly) all over the place and very distancing in the end. Sure it’s used to make wild and unique action set pieces but there’s rarely a sense of danger in what’s going on. It’s a very similar the problem I have with the Fast and Furious movies. A saving the world plot is rather mundane these days too. Even though I think the hook they come up with is a good one, maybe keeping the scope smaller would have helped? I thought I’d end up liking this more than I did. While I did enjoy it, I prefer the original more and I’d recommend watching Atomic Blonde and Baby Driver over this.

The Fate of the Furious– Eight installments! That’s how far this franchise has come and every time they need to come up with a decent reason to get the band together. This time Dom switches sides when a mysterious woman shows up to blackmail him into a terrorist plot. It’s an idea that gets Dom back on the other side of the fence and makes his friends not just work to foil The Big Bad but a friend as well. A good dynamic to make a fun enough sequel. This one was a little more reserved in terms of making the impossible possible but still retains that bombastic and fantastical Xtremeness that fans show up for. As the credits rolled I said to myself, “Yes that was another Fast and Furious movie” and I think that’s all most people ask for. For myself, this franchise has turned into a kind of Friday the 13th where all the movies blur together and I can’t remember what moment is from what movie. The one story that does stick out to me is the 5th, which I think is head and shoulders above the rest.

The Americans S6E05

The Great Patriotic War

It’s a growing war in the Jennings household.

The rift between Elizabeth and Philip is far greater than a disagreement. It’s a full division of ethics, morality, and political ideology. Since Philip decided to remove himself from the spy mission, he and his wife started living separate lives, all the way to the point in cleaving the parenting responsibilities in half. Paige to Elizabeth and Henry to Philip. Philip, from day one of the idea of getting Paige on board with the spy mission, has been opposed to it. He’s sat on the sidelines, in the dark mostly, on how Elizabeth is teaching Paige and the problems have gotten so bad, it’s becoming a danger outside of the house. Paige is taking risks and making terrible mistakes. And it’s all comes down to Elizabeth.

I’ve said that Elizabeth has been using (teaching) kid gloves with Paige for far too long and it’s blowing up in her face. She’s letting Paige make too many mistakes. Where others would have been let go, Paige is continuing to be used on missions. It’s nepotism at its worst. This time, Paige gets into a fight at a bar and throws down to physically defend herself. She’s known there so she’s drawn a huge spotlight to herself. “You can never go back there.” “Yes, I know that.”

Paige asks her mother to spar to blow off steam (and practice) where all of her transgressions come out–and Philip is there for it. She gets mad at her mother and snaps back, throwing an attitude far beyond her age and training. Sex comes up and that throws Phillip for a loop, forcing Elizabeth to tell him about the college intern mark Paige has/had in her sights. Elizabeth tries to talk him down, that she told Paige in no certain terms to not honeypot this guy to make him a source. With the bar fight, Elizabeth gets a much brighter picture that Paige isn’t meant for this line of work. When she says it to Philip, that he was right, he angrily tells her that “I said she would be able to do it. My point was that she shouldn’t do it.” Not only is he angry that his message was completely ignored, he’s furious over what Paige is turning into. The spy lessons may not be sticking too well, but the propaganda is.

Elizabeth spends way more time with Paige than Philip now. It also looks like Elizabeth and Philip don’t spend much time together. They definitely don’t have the bond they used to. Elizabeth is using Paige to keep the Soviet fight alive since she pretty much lost Philip in that role. As Elizabeth sees it, him stepping away from the work, is a giant step away from her. She can’t confide in him, she can’t work things out with him, she’s doing all the heavy lifting by herself. I think she resents him for it and that’s inadvertently seeping into Paige.

Philip is so flustered by finding out all that stuff about Paige during the sparring match that he goes to her apartment to talk to her. He asks if her roommate is around and when she says no, he finally speaks up about what she’s doing with her mother. Paige let’s loose with a flippant comment along the lines that he isn’t like her or Elizabeth, they see the world differently than he does now. It’s serious shade thrown at him and I’m not sure if she even realized it. I certainly did when his whole demeanor changed. If Philip was mad before, this pushes him over the edge. He tells her to attack him, show him what she’s learned, all the skills that Elizabeth has taught her on the quest to “save” the world.

He straight up dominates her. She’s tentative at first but he makes it clear he isn’t playing around. It’s a reality check from her father with anger fueling it. Oh, so you know what the world is like? You know everything? You think you’ve been in the trenches with your mother? You know nothing. He easily blocks every single one of her attacks and reverses the ones that leave her wide open. He could have easily choked her out but simply pins her against the wall, unable to do anything. This shocks the hell out of her. He is far more capable–and dangerous–than she ever thought he was. Paige still thinks the American source killed himself in front of her mother, she has no idea the extent of the darkness her mother, father, and those who have worked with them have done.

So with this battle going on, it was heartwarming to see Elizabeth and Philip come together. It had been so long since we’ve seen them express any sort of compassion to each other, it felt like a major milestone. Maybe things would start getting better between them. The morning after the lovemaking, Philip is a bright and bushy tailed man. After he makes Elizabeth coffee she lays down a bomb at his feet. Kimberly leaving the country, away from her father, is a problem. She needs the information the tapes they get stashed with her father. All other missions have failed and it’s desperation times because the summit is getting close. She needs him to do a hail mary mission: meet with Kimberly in Greece, get her to go to a communist country, plant drugs on her, and get her arrested. This will allow them to yse Kimberly as leverage to get her father to tell Elizabeth everything she needs to know. Then, Kimberly will be released and Philip will be all the way out of the spy game. Elizabeth will never ask him to do anything for the Soviet Union again. After a while, Philip agrees to do it. But…would he have said yes if Elizabeth didn’t break the ice last night? Did she honeypot her own husband to manipulate the decision in her favor?

Philip meets up with Kimberly and floats her the idea of visiting her in Greece. She doesn’t go for it and he ultimately crosses the line with her to get her to change her mind. After years of not getting physical with Kimberly (she was underage after all), he sleeps with her to change her mind about Greece. She wouldn’t be meeting up with her friend, but her boyfriend. He’s back doing everything he resents. When Elizabeth asks him if Kimberly agreed to the meet-up, he says yes but doesn’t tell her what he did.

Through all of this, Elizabeth has blinders on. She’s laser-focused on doing the work her homeland puts her on. Figuring out the summit is just one problem, Gennadi is the other. And she’s made much more progress on Gennadi. Following Stan has paid off, they’ve found him. Elizabeth is on the hunt and after one close call in an alleyway, she sneaks into his apartment to kill him. What she didn’t realize though, is that Sofia has come with their kid to spend the night. She tries to bail on the mission but gets caught, killing both parents and leaving the child to discover them murdered just feet away.

Stan is devastated when he arrives on the scene. That day he was hanging out with Gennadi, bored out of his mind wishing he wasn’t being forced to babysit this guy. Hours later, the people he swore the bureau would protect for their help are dead. Right underneath the nose of protection.  I think it’s safe to say he’s having flashbacks of Nina.

Stan mopes into the Jennings household the next day and finds Philip alone eating lunch. Over a drink, Stan tells him about the two Russians who were killed last night and Philip has a hard time hiding his honest reaction. It’s one of shock and disgust. While he explains it away to Stan as being surprised at hearing such a thing (which is true) he knows that it was Elizabeth.

Before this, I thought Philip had already been pushed to his limit. His fight with Paige was a physical manifestation of his anger and disgust. This news seals the deal, Philip completely flips. He calls Kimberly from a phone booth that night and severs ties with her. He will absolutely not help Elizabeth in any way now. He goes a step further than “breaking up” with Kimberly, he cryptically warns her about her trip. Stay in Greece, do not leave with anyone that approaches you. Come right back home. I think this is the first time Philip has risked outing himself. This is massive.

Philip has planted his flag firmly in American soil.

2018 NHL Playoffs Round 2

Round 2 is going to be a straight up dog fight in every match up. Nashville is the favorite for the west. Can the Las Vegas Knights continue to make history? Washington is going up the two time defending champions along with the dark cloud of not making it past the 2nd round in something like 20 seasons. Insane pressure for both teams and they are both monster teams, so it could go either way. Washington has to keep focused and calm no matter what happens or Pittsburgh will take advantage. Tampa is having another big run and there are quite of few ex-Rangers on that roster now. I think I favor them over Boston but you can’t sleep on Boston, they’re scary good too.

The Darkest Winter Update 4

Another milestone has been hit. I finished editing the 3rd quarter a few days ago. It was much simplier to complete as I didn’t change as much. What I did change didn’t require any major reorganization, I just needed to take care to fix any continuity errors that came up due to the edits. That made my life simpler.

Today I got the next chunk back from Wil today so I’m getting close to the end. I have a bunch of edits in mind but I’m confident I’ll get through it at a good clip. More 3rd quarter changes than 2nd quarter. As I was thinking about getting started today on this new material, I had a realization about a detail in the second quarter that doesn’t make much sense. So I’m going to change one detail about what Tim brings with him on the trip (which will alter 3 paragraphs total, so it won’t take me long to address it) before I dig in on the 4th quarter.

Progress is being made, looking to finish the whole project next month. Book cover design will be starting soon.

The Americans S6E04

Mr. and Mrs. Teacup

Another brutal episode for Elizabeth.

The Americans have always been very careful about presentation. How scenes are shot, the careful and calculated way the spies talk. Give just enough information and always listen carefully. I bring this up now because of how stark the portrayal is between Elizabeth and Philip compared to how they used to be shown. They are almost always filmed physically far apart now. In the opening, after Philip comes home after meeting Oleg, Elizabeth comes in from having a cigarette. They have a conversation from opposite sides of the kitchen.

I find this to be the hardest part of the show to watch. We’re constantly shown how far Elizabeth and Philip have grown apart. The work ruined Philip psychologically, leaving the entire burden on Elizabeth. They have different ideas on communism vs capitalism now. They aren’t on the same side any longer and that’s even split their kids down the middle. Elizabeth tends to Paige and Henry is with Philip.

When they are in bed and Elizabeth coldly refers to Henry as Philip’s problem, I never thought I’d hear that. It was one of the bleakest things she’s ever said. There’s a wall between them in that entire scene and Philip tries multiple times to get through (whether that’s done through love of his wife or will of his mission is questionable but I do think it’s out of love) and it was hard to watch. He tries talking to her, touching her, making an effort to turn back the clock to when they operated as one. It leads to another hard line from Elizabeth: “I’m tired all of the time.” That says it all.

With Henry away at school and Paige in the thick of things, that puts Paige front and center of her parents falling apart. They openly fight, it’s so bad they can’t really hide it. With the stress of the spy game not being enough, this poor girl is being turned into knots over her parents feuding over her continued role spying with her mother. When it starts up, Paige immediately wants to leave, to try and stem her parent’s fight but Philip storms out saying it doesn’t matter, there’s no use in them talking about what’s going on so she should stay to talk to her mother. Paige had recently dug up info on someone she thinks could be a source and her mother flags her down from it. She’s not ready to make a source, she hasn’t had the necessary training. If she’s attracted to this guy, then you go for a normal relationship, you can’t have a real relationship be a source. It doesn’t work. So where do we leave Paige? She’s slept with the guy after a dinner party and she’s eyeing his work badge. She’s conflicted about what to do next. I don’t think she knows what to do and I can only hope she doesn’t make a massive mistake.

Henry’s bad news is that he probably won’t be returning to his school for his senior year. In the first episode of this season, I wrote that Philip had made great gains with the travel agency, but it turns out he expanded way too fast. The business didn’t take off and the loan he took out to make it happen is now crushing him. While Philip has the joys of beer, food, and line dancing, he now knows the American past time of debt.

Elizabeth goes on another mission to get the radiation detector using the security info she got from the guy she killed last week. It ends in a complete failure with no detector and three dead. Bad luck? Sloppy, rushed planning again or bad luck? It’s a disaster either way. And as a side note, this might have been the worst shot action scene in the entire series. I could barely see anything it was so dark.

Kimberly comes home from school and meets up with Philip’s “Jim” persona. They catch up a bit, Philip giving her no new information on what “Jim” is up to now and she tells him that she’s going to Greece for Thanksgiving which means the wealth of  information they’ve been getting from the bug on her father is about to be cut off right when Elizabeth needs it. There’s nothing Philip can do about it and Elizabeth gets mad which makes her push the limits…

It’s time for the World Series and the Haskard’s have friends throwing a party. When Elizabeth finds out who is going to be there (the perfect opportunity to catch Glen Haskard and the Soviet she’s been tasked to watch on the summit negotiation team), she pushes them to go. Erica think’s she’s too sick to go (she’s right) but Elizabeth lies through her teeth (I’ve taken much sicker people than you for a night out) to convince them to go. Elizabeth is desperate for a win and she’s now taking crazy risks to get one. She’s rewarded with vomit from Erica (“I shouldn’t be here!”) and another complete failure: the bug she had put on Glenn caught him talking with the Soviet but the conversation was stopped when Erica got sick. Elizabeth is secretly tormenting this family for no reason. Oddly enough the one thing Elizabeth did get from Erica was the message “I wish I spent more time with my husband.”

Also, I’ve been waiting for this for years and it’s now going to happen. The world of the Jennings spy family and their FBI neighbor, Stan, are coming into direct contact. The defection of Sofia and Gennadi has put HQ on high alert. Gennadi has got to go, he’ll be a propaganda nightmare for the Soviet Union. They think they’ve tracked down Stan as one of his handlers so he’s the key to get to Gennadi. Claudia gives Elizabeth the mission to follow Stan to get Gennadi’s location.

The fight between progress and the status quo has made a soup of misery for Elizabeth and Philip. Things are getting worse for the both of them with no relief in sight. How far will Philip go to stop her? How much can Elizabeth use Paige effectively and good lord is Paige going to get herself caught or killed on her own? Will Stan end up being the one to expose the Jennings’ after all this time? With how well Elizabeth’s missions have been going it’s impossible to see her pulling this one off.

The Americans S6E03

Urban Transport Planning

Yeah, we still have two spies on the show.

The show picks up right after Elizabeth’s mission imploded. Instead of talking about what happened, Elizabeth unloads on Paige about leaving her post. She broke every protocol and endangered the entire mission. She even goes as far to say, if you weren’t my daughter, you’d be finished. If Paige didn’t know she had a shield of favoritism around her before, she knows now.

I was worried about how Paige would be affected by seeing her mother covered by the brains of a dead man and she’s handled it way better than I ever thought she would. A big factor is that she thinks the American killed himself. She doesn’t know that the bullet was intended for her mother.

The house divided shows again. Philip and Elizabeth have different approaches to guiding Paige through this. Philip takes the gentle road. Asks about her feelings, talks calmly and generally wants to ease Paige around. Elizabeth takes the hardline stance. She’s mad as hell and offers no comforts to Paige. No, you can’t stay here tonight, go back to your place we’ll talk about this later.

When Paige leaves, Philip moves in. He may be out of the game for a few years but he didn’t forget any of his coercion techniques. He manages to get mission information out of his wife. She opens up a lot in the comfort (maybe shield is the better word) of their home but she stops talking before she says too many details. It was hard to tell if she realized what Philip was doing or if just by instinct she knew to draw a line because he isn’t working anymore.

This episode shows more of what Philip is comfortable with now. He doesn’t miss espionage. When Henry calls from school, Philip is all about talking to his son about hockey. He only deflects the call because a volcano is spewing lava into the living room behind him. He gives a sales pep talk at work and we find out the Jenning’s are a bit cash strapped at the moment. He wheels and deals delaying a payment for Henry’s private school tuition. He likes being a traditional American dad.

Elizabeth is just neck deep in the meat grinder. She’s doing everything with the original mentality she had when first placed in the USA years ago. The Soviet way is right, America is wrong. She talks to Paige about the sacrifices they must be prepared for in their line of work. The mission with the American went wrong because she rushed the correct process to work an asset because of the strict deadline. She loves her homeland. She spends time with Paige and Claudia listening to their music, cooking their food, watching their TV shows. And then when she leaves Claudia’s apartment, America comes crashing back down like an anvil.

In another stark scene for contrast, Elizabeth brings home a bit of the food for Philip. He says it smells great but demurs that he just ate Chinese takeout for dinner. He’d love that home cuisine, but he’s just too full. Elizabeth quickly takes the dejection and moves to throw it away (their protocol so strict that that shouldn’t have a shred of Soviet anything in the house) and Philip quickly moves to take a bite. It does nothing to break the sadness of the close up off Elizabeth dumping the food into the sink and turning the disposal on.

Meanwhile, we get to see Renee possibly angle Stan to get a job at the FBI. He quickly shuts it down. Also shut down is Sofia and Gennadi. Sofia wants a divorce so the stable relationship they need is ruined and she’s running her mouth to the man she met. It’s too risky to keep them on the mission (which only Gennadi was seemingly doing) so the FBI pulls the plug. That means the two will be separated by witness protection to keep them safe. It means that Gennadi will be separated from his wife and child. His family is being physically pulled apart.

Stan also pays a visit to Oleg, who is none too pleased to see him. Stan explains how he told (and threatened) the FBI to leave him along. Oleg isn’t exactly moved by the explanation and apology so Stan moves on to the business on hand. Whatever you are here to do, don’t do it. Oleg doesn’t say anything.

The episode ends with Philip and Elizabeth on their own missions. Elizabeth works a mark for security details at a facility that holds the radiation detector she needs. Philip goes to meet Oleg. After getting the information she needs, Elizabeth strangles the mark to death.

Elizabeth is a ruthless soldier. Chills. Another rock solid episode.

34-39-9

The New York Rangers’ season is mercifully at an end. The last 10 games were a mudslide of pain and disappointment. They were out of contention for a while now but that doesn’t make loss after loss, mistake after mistake any easier to take.

34-39-9 is a terrible record. Not the worst in the league (24th) so there is your silver lining. Major things need to be done over the summer and the draft in June will be the most telling. I’ve had my reservations about coach Alain Vigneault being on the job for a while now and last night the powers that be made the decision: he’s done. Now the other half of the puzzle needs to be found. A coach that can foster what will without a doubt be a roster of mostly young players. Rebuild!

So while my hockey interest is chopped down, the playoffs are really stacked. There are many monster teams this season and the Las Vegas Knight story is nuts. The first season of the franchise and they made it easily into the playoffs. I’m interested to see how far the can go. Is this the year the Capitals shake free the noose and get to the Cup? I don’t think anyone believes the Devils are going to get past the second round and I’ll be cool with anyone but the Kings and Penguins winning. I think Kings have a tougher hill to climb than the Penguins this year. There’s going to be many great series starting on Wednesday the 11th.

 

The Americans S6E02

Tchaikovsky

Everything is getting worse for Elizabeth. She’s being put into more and more dangerous situations by herself at an alarming rate. Her life and Philip’s have never been more different. He’s upset about a long time client going to a competitor and she has to figure out how to do a lunch meeting in the State Department cafeteria!

Philip is largely in the back seat now. He exists on the peripheral of Elizabeth’s world. He goes about his separate, civilian job while she’s in the trenches of trying to continue the Soviet Union’s fight in what are, historically, the waning years of the Cold War. He checks in with Elizabeth about Paige and that’s about it.

Elizabeth is juggling and spinning plates at the same time. And one of those plates is her most valued: Paige. While Paige is gung-ho about the secret family business, she’s still green. It’s a good three years into her training now and while she’s in the field, she’s not that good and Elizabeth is worried about her. Even worse, she’s still treating her with kid gloves.

There’s no way around it: Paige is a creampuff. Elizabeth knows this and it sounds like she’s thinking long-term with this in mind. When she talks to Claudia about Paige, she see’s her daughter being embedded into an organization like the CIA where she can stay behind a desk to pass information along, not doing covert ops on the outside.

The work that her parents do is gross. They’ve done terrible, psyche-damaging things. Philip hit his limit years ago. When Paige first found out her parents were spies, they eased her into it. They lied to her about any notion of using sex or violence to accomplish their missions–they convinced people with words. We’re talking about a young woman who got really conflicted about pushing Pastor Tim out of the country last season. She felt guilty about changing his life behind the scenes and that was a dream scenario come true for him. What her parents kept from her is that he was almost killed to get him out of the way. Elizabeth is still fronting to Paige about the world her daughter is now in and she can’t keep doing it. Paige reads about using sex as leverage and coerision and Elizabeth tells her it isn’t true. She then fights with herself about lying to her and sort of admits that it’s possible. That you can get close to targets and how dangerous that is. This all comes to a head when Elizabeth pushes an old American contact for a lithium-based radiation detector and it goes horribly wrong. Last season Paige freaked out over getting jumped in a parking lot and seeing her mother kick some ass. What’s going to happen to her now that she’s seen a man’s brains all over her mother’s face? If Paige wasn’t her daughter, Elizabeth wouldn’t be training her this way. She’s being a parent first and it’s caught up to her.

Aside from the deal gone wrong, Elizabeth is also keeping tabs on her American negotiator mark, Glenn (the husband of the ill woman, Erica). Erica is deteriorating quickly, Claudia tells Elizabeth that her goal is to keep her alive until after the summit. Elizabeth is really uncomfortable on this mission. She’s not a real nurse so her bedside manner is terrible. She openly distains art, which is basically Erica’s life force at this point. Erica has no patience for any kind of nonsense so she forces Elizabeth to sit down and take a crack at drawing. She’s going to make Elizabeth look at the world differently. In another uncomfortable scene, Elizabeth offers Glenn help to shorten Erica’s suffering.

Then she’s got her old contact set up a lunch meeting at the State Department to catch up (he thinks she’s also an employee). A Soviet spy getting into essentially ground zero for getting caught is a hell of a task and when forced into it, Elizabeth commits to it (Claudia’s face when she tells her where the meeting is, says it all). She barely pulls it off and ends up getting valuable information. Ronald Regan is apparently going senile. That means he isn’t running the show…the people around him, who are even more hard-line about the Soviet Union, are most likely calling the shots now. This throws out the rulebook the Soviets have been using.

Meanwhile, Stan and Dennis’ mark from last season is in bad shape. Sofia was always a risk, she’s a blabbermouth. The man she met, Gennadi, ended up being a lucky get. He was all about helping out and has become valuable for the services their department put them on (it looks like an info courier). Stan has moved departments though, so he’s removed from managing them. Gennadi asks to speak to him directly and he goes to help out Dennis. Sofia is fed up with Gennadi and wants a divorce. She’s convinced he’s cheating on her and she’s met a “nice man” at work. Gennadi doesn’t know why she kicked him out. Her talking to another man is bad enough (re: blabbermouth) and the dissolution of this relationship could completely kill this asset (literally too, what Gennadi does is dangerous). Also, Oleg has been spotted by the feds in the country. He’s got all the right paperwork to be in the US, but Dennis would like Stan to talk to him if they were to cross paths. I look forward to seeing that.

Finally, I noticed a disturbing undertone throughout. Elizabeth planning for her end. Everything is riding on this summit. All of her missions now are putting her in danger. The odds of getting caught at the State Department were huge. She tells Claudia what she wants her to do with Paige if she gets caught. Talking to her old contact (starting at the bookstore) made her worry about her home and thus her future. Her contact thinks the US holds all the cards and that the Cold War is really close to coming to the end. That means the end of Elizabeth’s work…in failure. She and Philip devoted their whole lives to this. Odds are, Philip would be okay with this outcome. Elizabeth, definitely not. From her perspective, she sees the end of her life. Prison, the ever-present threat of death, failure of her life’s work. And this fear makes her push the second old contact (he went to them in 1981 about the Star Wars program) too hard. He freaks out and she almost gets killed. One dangerous job turned out okay but the second is a disaster. The consequences are going to be major.

The Darkest Winter Update 3

I’m halfway through the final edit of the book. The second quarter took me way longer to do than I ever intended.

A large part of that was procrastination, which I have come to realize is my mortal sin. There’s no good reason for it and it bugs me how easily I can put something off. The strange thing is how great it feels to accomplish a major milestone. You’d think that would always be the main driving factor but my mind doesn’t seem to regard that reward as strong enough. It’s something to work on.

But I digress. The edits I did took way more work to do than I initially thought. Making changes to how Tim gets his plan out turned out to be more complicated. I read the whole section and made notes on where what I needed to change was. I first organized my thoughts and ideas that way. Then I started moving things around. Deleting sections or maybe just some dialog. Move entire sections forward or back.

The first big thing: moving sections makes gaps. So continuity gets broken and the parts don’t fit together. That meant I needed to write new transitions. So that was easy or hard depending on what it is. And whenever I write something new, sometimes I like it a lot, sometimes I know I need to come back to it and sometimes I think it’s good but then I read it and I hate it.

Rewriting those parts happened a lot. Which meant a ton of tweaks which meant I thought and rethought everything. I did a lot of pacing around in my head. For a while there it felt like I was focused solely on punching things up and changing conversations to ensure it makes sense.

So I’m on to the next chunk. I have some serious tweaks to do in this section for the city scene. I have a good idea of what I’m going to and in this part, I don’t think I’m going to have to move anything, it’ll be more like tailoring a suit. Change details to get my intention across better (very important…it’s a sensitive scenario) and do some better world building to bolster that.

Right now I’m thinking it’ll be pretty easy but that’s exactly what I thought when I was going into the section I just finished. So, well see. But it will be done and it will be better.